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Simon's Poetry |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
Hello everyone, I'm new to these forums, but i've been looking for somewhere to write a leave my poetry for other to read and enjoy, I like to keep my poetry together so they will mostly be kept in one thread. Of course constructive criticism is most welcome, and needed from time to time I'm sure. So here is the first I will post. Dawn Through a dark cold winter night Strangling from the pain Awaken to a bright lit morning Secure, safe and sane The crimson sky that brightens the day At rest on sand my feet in the water The tide coming in and clouds fading away I arise from the sand and i begun to search The deepest depths within my soul And found what was left, with nothing more to say Shead a tear, and flood a sea For we shead them sometimes The fever is gone with the tide And my soul has healed at last SB 10/4/08 I hope you will enjoy my work. Simon |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello Simon... welcome to our pages blue.. I'm sure you will love it here! I did so enjoy your first post with us... I will look forward to reading more..  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
Thank you very much, I will most certainly post many more poems in the near future. |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
In Light of Darkness Shade of grey, scan the horizons Darkened, blackened, cold and dazed Wide eyed me awake for the for time nothing left to fear, I'm so unfazed The shear dread of dawn seaps away And the flood of joy that flows through Hoping with all my that the skies will stay Dreaming that they may, but not too sure Still hoping for the day, come what may That dreams come true, for freedoms sake I open my eyes too a new dawn at morning Safe again in my own bed, with you Dreaming once more of tomorrow's day No fear of the dark to come, I pray for tomorrow SB 11/4/08 |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Welcome to where care and compassion flow… Your dawn is beautiful… Tammy<333 |
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