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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-12 12:23 PM


i just had surgery and before i did my friend gave my a gift, it was a stuffed dog

Oh, how soft and
comforting
a stuffed animal can be

when your little
in the middle
of the night
when your at fright

or a gift before
you go under the knife
or maybe your very first flight

Oh, how soft and comforting
a stuffed animal can be
it gives you the illusion
everything is safe

but the really world
does
haunt you
someday

JJ

© Copyright 2008 JJ - All Rights Reserved
NeonKnight
Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36
New South Wales, Australia
1 posted 2008-04-12 01:03 AM


lol, that was a very sweet poem. And quite true. I hope the surgery went well.
Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
2 posted 2008-04-12 06:53 PM


This is awesome… I want my stuffed pup now!!!


Tammy<333

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2008-04-12 08:22 PM


yeah I got a teddy bear

love how you ended this poem!

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
4 posted 2008-04-12 08:25 PM


I enjoyed the warm comforting tone--it showed how the simplest things can reassure.
sharyn

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-04-12 11:16 PM


thanks you guys, and yes my surgery went well. i have to lay low for a while though, but the sleep is good

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
6 posted 2008-04-13 12:55 PM


glad you enjoyed

JJ

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
7 posted 2008-04-14 01:34 AM


very sweet. The stuffed dog carries many, many good wishes.
beautiful poem.
Wish you recovered well.

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