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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-04-11 11:21 PM





Just for a lifetime or two
that was your wish
you said
then you smiled
and your eyes sparkled
in that come hither way
and then you kissed me
for all to see
and the not so proper of me
let the inner girl free
so the moment could linger
just long enough

to hear your whispers silence my thoughts


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (04-12-2008 06:48 AM).]

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shyvl
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1 posted 2008-04-11 11:45 PM


This was very romantic and sweet.  the details were moving and well expressed.
sharyn

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-04-12 04:29 AM


Dear Roniece, how absolutely delightful!

Sigh ... for a lifetime or two would be great ... and still we yearn for eternity! This is love's prerogative.

Enjoyed this beautiful offering very much.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-04-12 06:33 AM


Hi Roniece how romantic is your poem, thank you for sharing my friend poet....

   yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-04-12 06:46 AM


Sharyn, Margherita & Yann... thank you so much for leaving your wonderful comments on my work... you smile me .. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-04-12 06:51 AM


ms r&b, it seems something public would be lovely with you..but one might get in trouble?  enjoyed your romantica here.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-04-12 07:39 AM


yes, you are most probably right Mr Daark... damnit, that good catholic school girl will just have to stay!   thanks for your comments... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

HopeS
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7 posted 2008-04-12 08:43 AM


Beautiful romantic feelings flowed through your pen

Hope

poddarku
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8 posted 2008-04-12 09:00 AM


this is a sweet emotion put into words.nice to know there is these emotions alive

clever talks delay friendship!

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-04-12 09:15 AM


A wonderful style for sharing special moments...James
effjayel
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10 posted 2008-04-12 02:30 PM


RDB...For You

.

.

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2008-04-12 03:16 PM


Dear RDB,

Nice going Hon.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2008-04-12 08:34 PM


Hope.. thank you so much x

Ku... thank you, that was a lovely comment

James... thanks lovely James x

John... ah! bisous pour moi?  merci beaucoup!! you are sweeter than honey!

Bobby... thank you for reading my work Bobby, it means a lot to me xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Larrysmom
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13 posted 2008-04-12 09:31 PM


My God RDB, do you ever not write perfection? This took my breath away! Just absolutely GORGEOUS!

Tammy<333

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2008-04-13 04:08 AM


Tammy... you know I am so pleased you are here with us on these pages blue... you smile me with your lovely comments and I do thank you ... love, your friend RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
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15 posted 2008-04-14 01:39 AM


very sweet. love the read.
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