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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-04-11 10:43 PM

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In street lamp’s light
A faint white mist
Hovers over
Sleepers’ dreams

If any
At all the bustles
Of the previous day
Making room
For those to come
Have passed away

Dawn slowly arrives
Behind the clouds
And birds appear
In the damp gray air

And on a road
Leading nowhere now
With April older
By another year
A soft spring rain

.

minna83
New Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 3
fitchburg mass

1 posted 2008-04-11 10:49 PM

I like that that poem

i am me

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-04-11 11:54 PM

beautiful John! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

3 posted 2008-04-11 11:58 PM

I enjoyed the pictures you created with your language. Especially
"In street lamp’s light
A faint white mist
Hovers over
Sleepers’ dreams"
that was my favorite part.
sharyn

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-04-12 04:31 AM

Discovering April with you and loving it.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2008-04-12 11:06 AM

well done!

"And on a road
Leading nowhere now
With April older
By another year
A soft spring rain"

"APRIL is the cruellest month, breeding
  Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
  Memory and desire, stirring
  Dull roots with spring rain"

--T.S. Eliot (of course!)

Applause for John's fine 'penning!'

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2008-04-12 11:54 AM

I do very much like your April!

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

7 posted 2008-04-12 09:01 PM

It took something very special to make me not hate April… Your words.

Tammy<333

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

8 posted 2008-04-13 03:27 AM

Beautiful painting!!! and wonderful poem.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2008-04-13 12:53 PM

This is beautiful, with a feeling of longing
that touches the heart.
Ida

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