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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-04-11 05:54 PM


Ten-year-old Felix
is in the hospital charity ward,
to get his tonsils out.  

He’s been told
that he’ll get ice cream
when the surgery’s over—
He’s interested.

At the same time
his mother is approached
by the hospital staff.  

One of their doctors
is doing research
on how broken limbs
heal in young children.  

All she has to do
is give her permission
for Felix’s leg to be broken,
and put in a cast.

There’s $500.00 in it
for Felix’s mother.

Of course she gives her okay,
signs off on the papers.  

It’s for the good of science.

It’s a painful experience for Felix.  
He doesn’t understand any of it.

Bobby

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hiddensmiles
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1 posted 2008-04-11 06:29 PM


good write but thats terrible and SAD

JJ

simon
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2 posted 2008-04-11 06:32 PM


Enjoyed...
Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-04-11 08:33 PM


Thanks JJ,

Yes it was.  Felix found it rather annoying.

Thanks for reading, and the kind comment.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-04-11 08:34 PM


Simon,

Thanks for reading, and commenting.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-04-11 09:20 PM


I got my tonsils out when I was 10 too Bobby... and I loved the ice cream!  Thank goodness I didn't need to have any limbs broken while I was there!  Felix has had to endure so much in his young life...  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-04-11 10:15 PM


Dear RDB,

Well, you know how it is Hon.  Mom had to keep food on the table.  She does it anyway she can.

Thanks for your concern for Felix.

Love Felix, Mom, and Bobby

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-04-12 04:49 AM


Bobby, this is really almost too much to bear. I think I'd rather have broken the limbs of that horrible doctor asking such a thing!! To exercise Christian love sometimes is really difficult!!
And now there are those who hunt "ninos de rua" to take their organs for transplant!! It's a most horrible practice.
We must love this world into change!!!!!!!!

Love,
Margherita

Angel4aKing
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8 posted 2008-04-12 05:39 AM


I bet it was pretty painful...poor felix...

~~~kingsangel~~~

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-04-12 06:41 AM


I can't believe it's true,  how terrible...
Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-04-12 09:57 AM


Margherita,

Street children such as Felix, and your "ninos de rua" are in constant danger throughout the world.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2008-04-12 10:00 AM


Angel4aKing,

Yes, it was very painful, both physically, and mentally for Felix.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-04-12 10:07 AM


Yann,

This story is based on the URL:
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/5907667/

and on a scandal from the 60's in the Trenton, NJ area.

Poor street children, such as Felix, are in constant danger of exploitation throughout the world.

Bobby

LeeJ
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13 posted 2008-04-12 11:06 AM


Bobby, you captured the saddness of a boys heart and eyes....


Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-04-12 11:19 AM


Dear LeeJ,

Thanks for saying that Hon, I appreciate that.  

The life of any child is a sad one, no matter what.

Bobby

effjayel
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15 posted 2008-04-12 01:50 PM


Bob, all broken limbs heal eventually, it is the damage done to the minds of exploited children that rarely if ever, get mended... John
Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2008-04-12 03:03 PM


Thanks John,

I think that must be true.  There is always a lingering bitterness.  My wife who was badly exploited as a child has describred  childhood.  

"You're always someone's slave, or their toy."

Sad, indeed.

Bobby

Larrysmom
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17 posted 2008-04-12 09:22 PM


There is not enough money, nor could I be starved enough to make me hurt or allow someone else to hurt one of my boys... And yet there are mothers who would and do... Sometimes this world makes me sick!

Tammy<333

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18 posted 2008-04-12 09:31 PM


This is sad but despite what you say it is not the norm to be treated this way.
My folks would have laid down their lives for their children as I would have for mine.  I choose to believe that we were the norm.  The sooner all parents have to pass a parent test to have children, the better.  Joyce

Robert E. Jordan
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19 posted 2008-04-12 09:58 PM


Tammy<333,

I have too many faults of my own to point a finger at Felix's Mom.  He wouldn't want me too.

Felix says: "Leave my Mom alone."

You know how he is.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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20 posted 2008-04-12 10:01 PM


Joyce,

We don't now, and I hope we never do, live in a cloned society.  All mothers are different.  You have to play the hand you're dealt.

Bobby

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