navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Whats Love About
Open Poetry #42
Post A Reply Post New Topic Whats Love About Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-11 05:37 PM



Whats Love About


Love is like a
two-edged sword,
it can cut you in
and it can cut you out.
Some say that it takes
a lifetime to know
what loves about.
I believe that it
takes a willingness,
an effort and a
heart full of
sincere desire.


JamesLee
11April
2008



  

© Copyright 2008 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-04-11 05:57 PM


James,

I think you've hit upon something here.  I like it loads, good work.

Bobby

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
2 posted 2008-04-11 06:04 PM


good work--I like the repetive imagery of the knife.
sharyn

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
3 posted 2008-04-11 06:27 PM


nice
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-04-11 09:23 PM


lovely James...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2008-04-12 04:52 AM


Ahh, James, in this moment I must say I understand this all too well. Usually I would not agree with the "effort", but sometimes it is needed, when we feel unable to love our neighbour, as ourselves, as Jesus taught us to do.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
6 posted 2008-04-12 06:49 AM


Oh la la my friend, it's such a wonderful poem, smiles....

   yann

K-K
Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153
Indiana
7 posted 2008-04-12 09:08 AM


I truly believe this to be true. Soft and sweet as always
effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
8 posted 2008-04-12 02:21 PM


And the chocolates & cherries gotta help to I guess
Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
9 posted 2008-04-12 09:28 PM


Wow! this is gorgeous James…

Tammy<333

Joyce Johnson
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
10 posted 2008-04-12 09:51 PM


Love can make you cry, can make you smile.
But love is most often worth the while.  Joyce

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2008-04-13 03:07 PM


Thank you Robert, shyvl, vandana, Roniece, Margherita, 2islander2, K-K, effjayel, Larrysmom and Joyce for the wonderful responses...James
Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
12 posted 2008-04-14 01:40 AM


wow, How true!!! very good, very good.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #42 » Whats Love About

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary