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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-04-11 09:26 AM


Old Felix
has all
the money
he needs.  

He’s what you’d call
“comfortable”.  

Down at the club,
he’ll often sit and listen
to other old geezers
talk about how happy
their childhood was,

and how they’d love
to return
to those gossamer
bygone days.

Felix reminds them
that they’re
somewhat demented.  

There is no such thing,
as “The happy childhood”—
it does not,
never did,
and never will
exist anywhere in nature.  

It’s all a total
and mindless
fabrication.  

Some people
are just never satisfied
with themselves.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-11-2008 09:58 AM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-11 09:29 AM


I'm pleased that the 'old' Felix is comfortable now Bobby...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

gilead
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2 posted 2008-04-11 10:19 AM


There's more truth here than meet the casual eye. Great work!

Art

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-04-11 10:25 AM


Dear RDB,

Thanks Hon, Felix is pleased, and grateful about it.

Felix sends his love.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-04-11 10:28 AM


Art,

Thanks for the kind words on this effort.  I'm pleased you found it to be true.  

Bobby

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-04-11 01:43 PM


I think some people have much better experiences than others and some remember things the way they wish they had been.
I usually see things pretty much the way they were. My childhood was a bit of a train wreck (but not as bad as some, I guess)and yet when I write I like to write about some of the good things I remember (even if I have to reach for them.)
                                 Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-04-11 03:21 PM


Ida,

Thanks for the reminder.

I do remember stealing one of those plastic magic square puzzles.  I did enjoy that puzzle, and of course there was always my Yo-Yo.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-04-11 03:45 PM


Just the kinds of things I was thinking about.
                               Ida

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-04-11 05:48 PM


Sadly Felix did not experience a happy childhood and so that has shaped his view of childhood...mine was good and bad.  Reminds me of a visit to a health food store, and the woman was recommending a herb that restores memory, and I told her that I didn't want to restore my memory, because some were fond but some were not so fond...she thought that I had the wrong attitude about that...perhaps I do, because at times I have wonderful memories of my childhood...James  
Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-04-11 05:56 PM


James,

There you go brother.  Thanks for your kind, and wise response.

Bobby

hiddensmiles
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10 posted 2008-04-11 06:32 PM


great poem !!!

JJ

simon
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11 posted 2008-04-11 06:37 PM


I agree with the others. I think most people 'borrow' nice experiences and adopt them as their own, the 'ideal' childhoods are less commonplace than we hear...
Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-04-11 08:36 PM


JJ,

Thanks for the kind words.  I'm pleased you liked it.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2008-04-11 08:37 PM


Thanks Simon,

I'm glad you liked the poem.  Childhood is always the pits.  Ask any kid.

Bobby

Larrysmom
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14 posted 2008-04-12 05:52 PM


It breaks my heart that he had such a horrible childhood.  

Tammy<333

Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2008-04-12 07:11 PM


Dear Tammy<333,

Felix's childhood was really run-of-the mill.  As he says, the happy childhood doesn't really exist.

He always had his corner friend Butch, and Wawa, and that crowd.  They were his real family.

Bobby

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