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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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0 posted 2008-04-10 11:09 PM



Where do we go after our time?
How does it feel…or does it even feel?
I’ve always wondered that question
And every time I do, I get a chill

Some say we go to heaven
But how is it?
Will we know, can we feel or touch the same?
Can we think or watch over loved ones a bit?

It doesn’t seem real
This short time we have to go
What will we do?
Hopefully time goes by slow

Just a thought
From your lil friend Jess
I don’t know if I should appreciate life
More or Less?

© Copyright 2008 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
1 posted 2008-04-10 11:13 PM


Always more Jess, always appreciate life more... Your writing is beautiful just like you.

Tammy<333

ILoveTheRain
Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA
2 posted 2008-04-10 11:15 PM


Back at you, Tammy! I love reading your poetry, along with many others.
Thank you for the comment.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-04-11 09:13 AM


Jess... another gifting from your heart.. thank you lovely girl... and I agree with Tammy... appreciate and live the life you have been given... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
4 posted 2008-04-12 10:21 AM


the unknown after life should make the life more valuable. of course we do not know life very well too

clever talks delay friendship!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-04-12 03:35 PM


I agree with RDB!

ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
6 posted 2008-04-12 04:21 PM


There is only today though we have been questioning "What's next" since times beginning.  Nice Write
sharyn

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