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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-04-10 10:12 PM


Some bring me fruit and flowers.
Every day's an anecdote.
A cautious tassel on our drapes
reveals the sunlight antidote.

I strong-arm the door for them -
a growling Annie's by my side.
Ever-eager Freddy is
consigned to terrier, again.
"My Hero --Alpha Dog!!" I lie.
"I am, " he whines.
I laugh.He sighs.
"Of course you are."

pat-pat-him-sweet

He wags the rug in smug placation.

Friends are different these days -
orbs are present in their eyes.
A haunting to be sure, I know,
I look at them and say goodbye.
Silently acknowledging
I can't correct what has transpired.
So I wish them well as they
walk their narrow, spindle-gait

There be dragons that prevail

I lock the door - security,
and I decide to sweep the floor.
Superstitiously--bad luck--

Take that with you, Mutha-wruck!

I will pray this day away.

Love is in the flickering
tealights and my potpourri
bubbles in the caldron we
keep hidden by the ficus tree
that twinkles with blue lights.

Nothing's on the stove tonight.
The cat is dying quietly.
"Layla" makes the pain alright
and Clapton is great company
singing sad sobriety
of one too many anecdotes.

Grief sings out the sixteenth note
and I am silenced by the weight
of memories I'd thought remote:

extra ordinary days...

* * *

Since I have regaled you all so many times with stories of my misadventures, I thought I'd share a quiet day with you all. And a wink to R.J.-"wruck" is a word. With a *wink* and love to all

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2008-04-10 10:20 PM


A nice tea of extraordinary grace.
Enjoyed as much, each sip I took!

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
2 posted 2008-04-10 10:21 PM


OH this is beutifuly awesome!!! I love this... It makes me smile and almost sad to.

Tammy<333

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2008-04-11 12:33 PM


Love the drive by in your life and times.  Your writing is so often like a road trip that carries the reader along.  
It speeds up and slows down accordingly, leaving the reader to breathe in the scenery.  

Fascinating poem, serenity.  

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-04-11 06:44 AM


Karen... lovely Karen... this is a compelling and awesome read! I'm saving it to my library to read again... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2008-04-11 08:44 AM


*cough* wouldn't it be lovely if we each contributed "a day" here?

to share is to gift.  Thank you Karen.

*fk*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2008-04-11 02:08 PM


Enjoyed sharing you extraordinary day.
                             Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
7 posted 2008-04-11 10:36 PM


a fine 'write!'...

"Love is in the flickering
tealights"

[I'm glad to hear it is somewhere!...]

applause for this 'penning!'

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
8 posted 2008-04-12 01:29 AM


Thinking of you my Ser....wish I could be there to keep you company.  But if a quiet day produces poetry like this, I guess it's good I'm not.  Hugs.....jojo
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2008-04-12 02:30 AM


smile...ya'll are so sweet to me.

thanks for being kind--my writer's muse is still being a boogeyman, so I had to take my inspiration in the ordinary.

I hope this wasn't too boring for you guys.

Some days, I just..."chill".

Ya'll get some sleep now.

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