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hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-10 08:52 PM

i am the moon
your bright smile
makes me glow
and i reflect true
beauty

i am the sun
when my heart
burns to hear you voice
and just be with you

i am the wind
as i think of you
with nothing else
blowing in my mind

i am a flower
when you take my hand
and stare at me
like nothing else
matters

you make me feel
beautiful
and i love that
about you

JJ

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

1 posted 2008-04-10 09:27 PM

I love this... so sweet and touching.

Tammy<333

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

2 posted 2008-04-10 10:17 PM

its very sweet, I cant help but smile

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-04-10 10:21 PM

jj--you nailed it. It's about who we are when we're with them.

Some people bring out the best in us.

And well? Others don't.

I loved this.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-04-11 07:55 AM

JJ... this is just beautiful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

5 posted 2008-04-13 02:48 AM

very very sweet, indeed! very lovely.

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

6 posted 2008-04-13 03:24 AM

Nice.....John

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-04-13 11:14 AM

Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

8 posted 2008-04-13 11:30 AM

This was a beautiful way to express the way some people bring out the best in us. I enjoyed the repetition in the verses also.
sharyn

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

9 posted 2008-04-13 12:13 PM

thank you all so much!!

JJ

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