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gilead
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0 posted 2008-04-10 03:46 PM



A lone, brown leaf on the patio floor,
Did I, without knowing, see it in the tree
When it was yet green and vibrant in the wind?

It’s eerie, as if it came by to say goodbye,
Or consider me, for I am the reflection of your destiny.
I took it in my hand, and held it tenderly
Before my eyes, as if to cling to the remnant
Of my own life turning brown in forced detachment.

I said words to it (or for ir) and took it in,
To find a place for it upon a shelf,
Where it would lie in state in the place dedicated
To the dead poets whose voices still sing to life.


© Copyright 2008 arthur chapman, jr - All Rights Reserved
gilead
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1 posted 2008-04-10 03:48 PM


My journal indicates this was written a year after my retirement in 2001, while I was under the influence of a fine Bordeaux!

Art

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2 posted 2008-04-10 04:16 PM


This is so beautiful and thought provoking, Art.
                                   Ida

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3 posted 2008-04-10 04:26 PM


Art, May I respectfully suggest ou pop the cork on a more frequent basis, I cannot write as god as this when I'm sober ! Good job Mate,   John
gilead
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4 posted 2008-04-10 05:35 PM


I lift my cup to thee, Sir John!

Art

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5 posted 2008-04-14 08:06 PM


I like this - it speaks well of you and of your Bordeaux!  Is the leaf still on the shelf?

A

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