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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-04-09 09:26 PM


Angelo’s just turned eleven to day.  

It just past nine at night,
and he’s not home yet.  

He’s out roaming the street,
with his gang of friends.  

Felix and Sally,
they’re not worried,
that’s where Angelo’s
supposed to be.  

After all, he is eleven.

It’s a crowded street,
with lots of neighbors,
sitting out watching.

That’s where they were,
when they were eleven.  

He’ll be home,
in his own good time.  

He is eleven.  

That’s the way
it’s supposed to be.

Bobby

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1 posted 2008-04-09 09:34 PM


When I was eleven I was running like a gypsy in the woods as late as I wanted.  Different world, but raised with independence.

Alison

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-04-09 09:49 PM


Alison,

That's good, that's what made you Alison.

My mother gave me my independence at ten.  She sat me down, and told me I could do anything I wanted to.  She wasn't going to worry.

She was a wise woman.

Bobby

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3 posted 2008-04-09 10:09 PM


I pretty much ran lose too. We learn what we live. I think one might be better off these days to be a bit street wise.
                               Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-04-09 10:15 PM


Ida,

Street wise pays big dividends.  Street dumb can be fatal.  I've seen that, it's a sad thing.

Bobby

Seoulair
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5 posted 2008-04-09 10:55 PM


Enjoyed the read. I have old memories too. Good.
Larrysmom
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6 posted 2008-04-09 11:08 PM


My pops turned me loose quite young, I in turn, turned Larry loose quite young, however, Larry turned around and brought his ENTIRE gang of friends home with him… They made a mess, ate ALL the food, demolished my house, and they NEVER left!!!

I love it that way…

Tammy<333

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2008-04-09 11:20 PM


Seoulair,

Thanks for the kind words.  I'm pleased it brought back memories for you.  I hope they were happy ones.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-04-09 11:23 PM


Dear Tammy<333,

God bless them all, and you too.  

When I was growing up, I was raised by the whole neighborhood.  I spent as much time at other peoples houses as I did at home.

That's the way it's supposed to be.

Love Bobby


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-04-10 12:30 PM


when I was 11 I was tucked up in bed by 7! LOL... I lived such a sheltered life! I'm pleased Angleo enjoyed his freedom Bobby... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-04-10 12:53 PM


Dear RDB,

Yeah, but you're one of those "girls".  

Roniece, there is nothing at all wrong with that.  We all have different ways of raising children.  That's the way it should be.  It makes for an interesting world.

God bless us all.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-04-10 12:55 PM


smiles... oooh yes, I'm one of those good catholic girls!!   thanks Bobby for the laughter.. x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-04-10 01:19 AM


Dear RDB,

Catholic girls are the best.  That's one of the reasons I never miss Mass on Sunday.

Bobby

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