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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-04-09 04:49 PM


Walking through the hallway of death to my demise,
I look around the walls, seeing pictures through dark black eyes,
The picture represent parts of my soul that have died,
A new picture appears besides me, and I start to cry.
It's a picture of a boy, so young and innocent,
His face is illuminating with gold, as if he was heaven sent.
The picture quickly rots away and the beauty fades like a withering rose,
I'm standing in this hall shaken and wallowing, holding the picture close.
The picture disapears from my cold hands and I continue on,
Walking like a flexible statue, all emotion quickly gone.
A portal opens up, black swirls and red droplets of blood consume me,
I'm trying to escape, I'm trying to break free,

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-04-09 05:10 PM


XTr3m3sT,

Anyone can break free of anything.  All it takes is will, and skill.

Bobby

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
2 posted 2008-04-09 09:52 PM


xTr3m3sT

As Bobby said, Will and skill...

This is awesome.

Tammy<333

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