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Open Poetry #42
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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-04-09 04:40 PM

As the overcast of damnation clouds the mind,
And the shadow of depression makes me blind,
As I walk across the asphalt floor of cremated flesh,
And I begin to cry.
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Inspired-8
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Pluto
1 posted 2008-04-14 02:02 AM

Powerful piece astounding imagery love it!

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shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
2 posted 2008-04-15 03:31 PM

Again very expressive language of the soul. Thanks for sharing
sharyn
Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-15 03:37 PM

Cry is good. Cry is good. very good poem.
MysteriousCellist
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since 2008-04-16
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Florida, USA
4 posted 2008-04-16 05:42 PM

Dude you rock. Your poetry is da bomb!

~MysteriousCellist
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