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gilead
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0 posted 2008-04-09 03:33 PM


The molten, amber glow of sunrise
Peeps up over the long, graceful slope
Of Mt. Fuji. The rooster is crowing,
And the fox has gone fishing—
Hey, iGoogle, cool scene! This is close,
But can you give me a little glimpse
Of Heaven, you know, angels,
Pearly gates, Eternal life, and such?

© Copyright 2008 arthur chapman, jr - All Rights Reserved
gilead
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1 posted 2008-04-09 03:37 PM


Hi, Simon. Your poem caused me to pull this little ditty out of the archives. The mind can wonder when you are computing in the presences of images.

Art

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-04-09 10:17 PM


I wouldn't mind a glimpse of that scene myself, Art.
Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-09 10:49 PM


Absolutely wonderful.
and I myself is writing a poem about Fuji, on the memory of human than heaven.

sewasham
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4 posted 2008-04-09 11:54 PM


Nice writing Art. Enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-04-10 05:17 AM


Enjoyed...James
Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-04-10 07:48 AM


Very good write, dear Art!  Google seems an infinite source of knowledge, but the deepest truth still have to be discovered within the heart/soul, you are right. But theories about heaven and eternal life are offered in abundance ...

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-04-10 10:39 AM


Fine "humour" Art, i like your well balanced poem

   yann

gilead
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8 posted 2008-04-10 11:07 AM


Thanks, my friends, for taking the time to share your thoughts!

Forever yours,

Art

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