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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
the Solution daily, early doves awake him, to examine the beauty of his still sleeping wife. only his dreams contain such vision. this is the moment, daily, he remembers to make waking hours, ones of peace. [This message has been edited by SkaaDee (04-08-2008 11:57 PM).] |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Beautiful, indeed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions! This was lovely in it's obvious gentleness, and very funny in the undertone... I read it both ways  Great write. |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
Hi I'm glad you like it and thank you for the welcome. I like writing short poems - less chance of spelling mistakes |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Simple but lovely. Welcome and thanks for sharing sharyn |
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