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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2008-04-08 07:58 PM

mascara
drips down
her eyes
because all
she can do
is cry
and all
you can see
is fear
that eats
at her

if only her life
was different
if only things
would change
but there is really
no hope to gain

JJ
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Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
1 posted 2008-04-08 08:00 PM

Oh hun, your sad but very beautiful poem makes me want to give you a big hug…

Tammy<333
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-04-08 09:07 PM

aww thanx

JJ
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-11 12:14 PM

i would gladly accept your hug

JJ
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