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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-08 05:40 PM


I memorize my life
like a script
read it
rehearse it
and when its over
i will sit there
waiting to see
if i got 5 stars



JJ

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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-04-08 05:52 PM


Nope...Emmy Award maybe? Better than me, I get the Razzie....  John
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-04-08 06:23 PM


huh? im confused

JJ

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-08 06:38 PM


Nice little poem and a philosophy in it.
PS John is very humorous person.

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
4 posted 2008-04-08 07:03 PM


lol ok

JJ

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2008-04-13 06:47 AM


JJ... love this! I would gladly give you 5 stars my sweet friend... and yes, our dear John is humorous and funny and intelligent and gorgeous and more!! ooh am I rambling on about his good side here??  LOL   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
6 posted 2008-04-13 07:55 AM


JJ - Well I reckon that if you don't get 5 stars you'll just come back and do it all over again until you get it right.  
shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
7 posted 2008-04-13 11:35 AM


Well put philosophy-sometimes we all forget to live in the moment and are waiting for an encore.
sharyn

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
8 posted 2008-04-13 12:29 PM


thank you

JJ

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