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Men Do Cry.. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity 
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. Whoever is responsible for the quote That grown Men don't cry Should see the lump in my throat And the tears in my eyes... This is not the way That it's supposed to be A Mother losing her child Is such cruelty I feel so helpless & crushed And don't know what to say I wish I could just Make your pain go away Tammy, your nightmare will never end And I know you shall always miss Larry But we as your friends All share the burden you carry And you will never be alone Within these pages blue For now you are one of our own Part of the family too..... . "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahhh, how touchingly you bare your heart, dear John! A deeply compassionate write for our new friend Tammy. Thank you for reaching out. Yes men do cry and I love those who admit it and don't feel diminished by showing their emotions of the heart. This is their true power. Love, Margherita |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Than you Maga, you know another fallacy is that crying makes you feel better, it doesn't. A necessary emotion? Yes for sure but I feel a somewhat wasted one at times..How can something as powerful as the outpouring of grief not make a difference / change anything? xx John |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Simply beautiful. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
OH Dear John, You have gone and made me cry… I don’t know how to thank you for these beautiful, beautiful words my dear friend… I am so honored to be included in your family here on these pages. And I will keep and cherish these words you have written for me for as long as I live… There truly is love and compassion in this world, we just have to look for it. Thank you so very much John. Lots of love to you, Tammy<333 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
ah, wonderful write dear John. You are very kind. Man does not cry unless there is heart touching issue. Love the read. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
xTr3m3sT, Seoulair thank you for for replying |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Tammy, Please don't cry, you'll set me off again...And as for thanks, it is I that should thank you for allowing us into your world to meet Larry. He is a fine looking young man, I was that handsome once  I do hope you stick around because they really are a special bunch of people on here as you will see for yourself. I am touched that I could write something of worth for you. There is a lot of love and compassion within these precious blue walls. Welcome to the family, and remember to visit us often we are here for YOU .. Take care & say hi to Larry from me next time you talk to him....much love, John |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, It's boys that don't cry. Men do. Bobby |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
NIcely written JJ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
John,  hahaha  Lots of love, Tammy<333 Oh yea, and Bobby is correct!!! All of the "MEN" in my life cry... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... you have written beautiful words for our friend Tammy... thank you for all the wonderful things to do for our friends on the pages blue... me included! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderfully and thoughtfully written, my friend, and yeah, wish I had a nickle for all the water I've shed...and that doesn't include sweat! jimmy |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
John, you are a true gentleman, a kind and thoughtful gentleman. Not many of those left these days. Ida |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Good job John. Nice sentiments. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a family! lovely piece John, straight from the heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, wonderful thoughts from a soft and caring heart...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I'm very touched indeed, yes, men cry but I hide myself then... yann |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
When I saw the Commandant of the U.S. Marine Corp cry at the bedside of a wounded solider, it only affirmed my long held belief I am no less a man when I'm moved to tears. A superb poem, John! Art |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ How lovingly tender of you to do~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
you are such a sweet one. How nice of you for your comfort. Of course!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes men do cry |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
John...Very compassionate write for Tammy. Grown me do cry...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Bobby, I’m afraid I was brought up the old way & it was not considered the done thing for the male of the species to show their feelings & cry. So by those standards, I’m a softie, but you know what? I could care less this is me and yes, I DO cry Thanks for understanding, you are a true gent...Hiddensmiles, ThisDiamond, I thank you... Tammy, See? I knew you could do it! So let me get this straight, I’m a man, I cry, & I’m now in your life....Ha, now you just try & git me out, I don’t think so......  RDB, I asked you not to tell anyone what we did, what time does the confessional close ? I’d better get my skates on...  Jimmy, Thanks my friend... you are a guy after my own heart... Ida, thank you so much, those comments really mean a lot, Cheers Steve, I admire your work greatly which makes your comments even more precious, Thanks Guy.... Dixie, you said it Gorgeous, I hope you are doing OK, we must chat again soon, xx Thanks James, you are one cool guy, I ever tell you that?  Yann, I am glad I managed to touch you. Do not hide your feelings my friend, it will only tear you up inside. Let it out... Gilead, Thanks for the praise & the analogy, I shall feel better when I do shed a tear thinking of that situation you refer to...God Bless you... Marge, you have no idea how long I’ve waited for one of your huglets I am just sorry that this was the topic that earned me one, Thanks !K-K, Now you are making me blush, guess I’m a full blown softie now! 1 slick-lady, Thanks for that.... Paul! How are you mate? Long time no see, I have had major creative blockages lately, I guess Tammy may have kick started my muse...thanks for the eyes.... |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
John, my dear friend, Tammy<333 |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
John my dear friend, Tammy<333 |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
As it just so happens John, I rather prefer the full blown softies, as most women probably do. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
John, your tender, compassionate heart is what makes you the real man that you truly are. Tammy's tragic loss has touched me deeply as well. I am so pleased that she discovered piptalk and that she is able to share her grief through her poetry with her new-found friends ~ such as yourself. God bless you both, Linda  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How very geneerouws of you. Your tender heart is showing. Love, Joyce |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Yes! Robert |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
is there not some commonality in the fact that the regimen of men is the tear in the eye from the touch of the heart...great write... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
John that is a beautiful poem, sad but beautifully written with a deep feeling of compassion. It truly shows your depth of character. Have a great day my friend. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
John my good friend, that is such a beautiful heart wrenching poem written with real compassion. It shows your real depth of character and feeling, very well done. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
John that is a beautiful poem, sad but beautifully written with a deep feeling of compassion. It truly shows your depth of character. Have a great day my friend. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
John that is a beautiful poem, sad but beautifully written with a deep feeling of compassion. It truly shows your depth of character. Have a great day my friend. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And you will never be alone Within these pages blue For now you are one of our own Part of the family too..... Oh John that is such a heart wrenching poem Told with much tenderness and feeling, I think that is one of your best but I do like all your poems. Great post John. Lindsay |
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