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Who Will Help Me.
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Who Will Help Me. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
What am I supposed to do? How am I supposed to show what I've been through, Openly I show that I am not capable of helping my own will. Worry filled faces stare at me while I start to abuse my body, I intoxicate my body with alcohol to relieve some stress, Life is slipping away from my grasp and I begin to accept that fact, Love is the only thing keeping me alive. Horrible nightmares infest my mind and I can't stand it, Electricity flows through my veins while blood does not, Large amounts of intensity my pen does spit, Possibly because my life is in a knot. My mind is gone and I can't handle it anymore. Erosion of the soul has just begun. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo xTr3m3sT, Your best helping hand is right at the end of your right arm--unless of course, your left handed, in which case, it's at the end of your left arm. I'm sure you'll find it. Bobby |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
xTr3m3sT, I just found this… It is a powerful piece. Grab the love that is keeping you alive and hold on to it with all of yourself and like Bobby said, keep writing and sharing your feelings… do not bottle them up. And also know that I am always, only an email away if you need to talk, scream, cry, vent or just need to know that someone cares and is there… Tammy<333 |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thank you my friend Tammy  |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
You are ever so welcome my friend Tr. Do you mind if I call you Tr? That whole letter, number, upper, lower stuff makes me feel like I’m talking to a robot!… hahahahaha Now I feel stupid!!!! I always copy and paste your screen name cause it’s all crazy to type, and I JUST NOW realized what it actually said!!!!hahahahahahhaha I’m a dork!!! hahahah Neeevveeeerrrrr miiiiind!!! hahahah ROFLMAO But seriously Extreme… Just remember what I said my friend. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very good writing... xTr3m3sT...take Tammy's and Bobby's advice... they always give good advice on here.... love RDB now, for the life of me I can't work out your name - that Tammy girl is waaaayyyy smarter than me!!! LOL!... hmmm, ok, I could be just having a blonde moment, but why did Tammy call you Extreme?? I do real names so much better! hint, hint! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (04-13-2008 02:30 AM).] |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Hi RDB, If you turn the 3's into E's it pronounces extremist… At least I think that is what was meant… I could be way off though. Tammy<333 |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Tammy, you are correct, LOL it does say extremist. :] if you check my most recent work you can see my in real life name  |
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x-tears-x Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43England |
Great writing and great imagary. I hope things will get better. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thanks Tammy, I always thought you were smart! Hello Angel! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Hello RBD, If you wouldn't mind please comment on my A Tribute to Poetry poem :-p It would be greatly appreciated. -Angel. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very sad. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
good poem |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
The pain and soulsearching sorrow leave my heart acheing for you. Keep using your words to voice these emotions. I pray for some sunshine in your life. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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MysteriousCellist New Member
since 2008-04-16
Posts 6Florida, USA |
Wow... you use alot of imagery.. lol, i need to get with the program.... ~MysteriousCellist |
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