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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-04-08 03:52 PM



All Over Me


Miss sweet
and sassy
your love is
like molasses
oozing all over me.
And I like it,
and I like you,
and let me add
I love you too.


JamesLee
08April
2008





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Larrysmom
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1 posted 2008-04-08 03:58 PM


Now this is just AWESOME!!! So sweet and to the point.

Tammy<333

Seoulair
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2 posted 2008-04-08 04:00 PM


Agree with Larrysmom and Always to the point.
effjayel
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3 posted 2008-04-08 05:24 PM


James, I'm not a gambling man but would I be right in assuming your Honey is due over to get in to the mix with the molasses??  Sweet write BTW   John
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-04-08 09:04 PM


wonderful James!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-04-09 05:37 AM


Thank you Larrysmom, Seoulair, effjayel and Roniece for the wonderful responses...
effjayel it will be soon, but not soon enough...I'm a little worried about the Airlines going bankrupt due to the high cost of fuel...James

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-04-09 07:39 AM


Wonderfully written indeed



ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-04-09 08:31 AM


You bring smiles of warmth and love, dear James, and not only to your Honey, you bring them onto these pages. Thank you !

Love,
Margherita

gilead
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8 posted 2008-04-09 12:01 PM


Short but ever so sweet! like a capricious wind in spring!

Art

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-04-09 02:05 PM


Hi James...There is justice in LOve....

Nice poem

  yann

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2008-04-09 07:39 PM


JamesMichael~
You give us smiles~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

LindsayP
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11 posted 2008-04-10 01:16 AM



Great post James

Lindsay

K-K
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12 posted 2008-04-10 09:46 AM


Melting, how tender
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2008-04-10 05:08 PM


Thank you Artic Wind, Margherita, gilead, 2islander2, Marge, Lindsay and K-K for the wonderful responses...James
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