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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-04-08 07:36 AM





Waves Whisper Amore

The ocean is calling
Waves whisper amore
Come sail along with me
Say farewell to the shore

Lay here beside me
In the silver moonlight
Knowing stars will guide
Lets sail off into the night

Attuned to the rhythm
Whilst the ocean sings
As waves softly serenade
Neath the billowing wings

I am the one who longs
For the songs of the sea
Lets go along with the flow
Sway side by side with me


HopeĀ©2008


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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
1 posted 2008-04-08 07:57 AM


The water is a part of me.  I can't breath without it.

Lovely writing.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-04-08 11:47 AM


Dear Hope, this is absolutely captivating and I love the picture!

You sound very convincing, may your whispers be heard.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2008-04-10 01:19 AM



I loved it Hope

Very romantic

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-04-10 01:45 AM


Hope... just beautiful!!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2008-04-10 10:42 AM


gosh...

this is breath-taking!

AAB
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since 2008-04-10
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Canada
6 posted 2008-04-10 10:44 PM


the wording is just amazing.
Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
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Florida, USA
7 posted 2008-04-10 10:52 PM


I have always hated boats... Your beautiful words makes me want to re-think this.

Tammy<333


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