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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-04-07 10:08 PM


Felix learns a lesson early on.

When he was new-born,
the doctor looked at his mother,
and saw a charity case,
that wasn’t going to pay.  

That doctor reared back
and smacked Felix
on the bottom
extra hard.

In this so called
land of the free
and home of the brave,
it really pays to have money.  

Even the illusion of money
has its rewards.  

If people think you have money,
why they’ll treat you more than right.  

Felix is a bright kid.  
He caught on to that lesson easy.

Bobby

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Larrysmom
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1 posted 2008-04-07 10:11 PM



“Even the illusion of money
has its rewards.”

Is in not the truth???

Tammy<333

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-04-07 10:21 PM


Tammy<333,

Yes, I'm afraid it is true.

That's not the way it's supposed to be.

Not here in the land of the free, and the home of the brave.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-04-07 10:36 PM


I like this Bobby.. Felix is a good boy at heart.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
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4 posted 2008-04-08 02:05 AM


how interesting. they obviously did on the wrong place.
good poem to record that.

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-04-08 04:35 AM


Yes, I guess it has always been that way, Bobby. I have observed the battle that goes on when someone dies over whatever worldly goods they leave behind and It's not pretty.
And I don't think it is going to change anytime soon.
                                Ida

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6 posted 2008-04-08 07:29 AM


money is indeed important

but I don't have a dime to my name and people are helping me until someone will have some compassion and give me a chance at a job


Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2008-04-08 08:07 AM


'Tis true...

My treatment is most often dictated by how I am dressed... and that prompts me to "play" with people...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-04-08 11:57 AM


Dear RDB,

Felix is a good boy all over, always was.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-04-08 11:59 AM


Seoulair,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  I don't know about such things.  I'm not a midwife.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-04-08 12:01 PM


Ida,

Probably not.  It's one of the uglier aspects of human nature.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2008-04-08 12:03 PM


Passing shadows,

Well, that's because you're super nice.

I hope you get a job soon.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-04-08 12:04 PM


Susan,

It's always loads of fun to play with people.

Bobby

Margherita
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13 posted 2008-04-08 12:33 PM


There are many things that can't be bought by money, to begin with health and true love.
Many might marry for money, but love will stay out of the marriage, etc. etc.

There are physicians that talk you into "something is wrong" because they want you to do all the expensive check-ups and others, the true doctors, who assist for free ill people who can't pay.

I understand that dear Felix got under the impression that money was IT. I bet he also learned that it wasn't allmighty.

We need to awaken to Love.

Thank you dear Bobby for this thought provoking chapter.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-04-08 01:32 PM


Margherita,

You're right.  You have to keep a tight rein on your doctor.

I have my doctor well trained.  We've been together for about 20 years.  He'll try and get rebellious now and then.  However, I put that down fast.

Thanks for reading, and the good advice.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-04-08 04:06 PM


Interesting...thinking now of two Beatle song..."I don't care too much for money, because money can't buy me love." and "Will you still please me, will you still need me when I'm sixty four."   Both seeming to be revelent for Paul McCartney now that he is sixty four and now that he has been taken to the cleaners by a woman whose love couldn't be bought by his money...James
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16 posted 2008-04-08 05:22 PM


How times change Bob, these days if the Dr slapped that hard, he would get slapped right back with a law suit no doubt....John
Robert E. Jordan
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17 posted 2008-04-08 05:31 PM


Thanks James,

Money buys food.  You have to have food to do much loving.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2008-04-08 05:37 PM


John,

I don't know how they handle that thing now.  When my kids were born, you couldn't get me near the birthing room.

Bobby

BugBuggy
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19 posted 2008-04-08 07:19 PM


how true it is great reading

BugBuggy

Robert E. Jordan
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20 posted 2008-04-08 07:26 PM


BugBuggy,

Yes, I'm afraid it is true.

I'm pleased it worked for you.

Bobby

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21 posted 2008-04-08 10:13 PM


Is this why we have birthday spankings?  Do you think?

Seriously, I like it - but I can't be too serious.  I don't think Felix would like it because we have to find humor in the stuff that is most unfunny.

A

Robert E. Jordan
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22 posted 2008-04-08 10:24 PM


Alison,

Felix says thanks Hon.  He's glad you like it seriously.

He's also glad you don't hate him like some of the people that run this place do.

Money is very important to Felix.  It keeps him fed.

Bobby

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