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How Long? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
How long will it be? How long our song will stay? How long we will know? This is long way to heaven Tis is long day to walk away How come we will ? How long the night will stay? Let the stars shine into the sky, Our song is still here Our love is still here so we don't have to worry Don't be sorry For our love Love is still alive, How long? How come our love is still hurting? Why? Where did we go wrong? Where did our love go? How long will it be? If I say that our love is enough to fill our hearts What you will say then? If I say the words that you don't like to listen How long? |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello vendana, lovely poem. huglets yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Vandana, your heart's questioning shows the depth of your love and this is lovely work. Love, Margherita |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write JJ |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
love the read. Love itself brings out so much trouble. But, all worth it!? enjoyed. |
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