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I'm sending you a star today
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I'm sending you a star today |
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Mountain Goat Junior Member
since 2008-04-06
Posts 32High Places |
I'm sending you a star today I'm sending you a star today, Sparkling as your eyes, I kissed it, sent it on its way Wishing you could realise The way I feel so strong so true, The dreams that fill my heart, The way I want to be with you, The pain of being apart. I'm sending you a star today, I hope you'll hold it to you, And lose the pain of yesterday, Just let it go and sadness too, See me, see all the joy there could be, All the promise of tomorrow, We'd ride the magic of maybe There'd be no more sorrow. I'm sending you a star today, With all my love it gleams and glows, With silent words I cannot say, But deeply wish that you could know, The way I feel so strong, so true The dreams that fill my heart, The way I want to be with you, The pain of being apart. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzie~ It is SO GOOD to see you again~ My mind turns back to years ago ... when you were but a teen ... my friend~ I hope that life is good for you~ Wonderful to see you still penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Very well written, much enjoyed....John |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A bright spot in my day to read your thoughts  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very romantic and dreamy! Welcome to PIP! enjoyed your poetry! ~ARH  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful write… Tammy<333 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I enjoyed this lovely write from you ! love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
oh could a person not swoon at that it remided me of the movie stardust in a weird way, thats not a bad thing though. |
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