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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-04-07 06:11 AM


sometimes we might be leaves
just playing eyes there
across the ocean of a room
with walls of lovers
in sad glances dancing

but there is more in our lips
the whispering of slick sounds
that only each other can hear
and pretend to ignore
until the reactions are revealed

and we press our skins together
to our own belly familiar songs
and let our arms drink their fill
til they hold on to each other
to keep from falling to quickly

into it won't ever go away again
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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-07 06:15 AM


sometimes we might be leaves
just playing eyes there
across the ocean of a room
with walls of lovers
in sad glances dancing

Mr Daark...lovely visual here.. love your words... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-04-07 07:53 AM


quote:
and we press our skins together
to our own belly familiar songs
and let our arms drink their fill
til they hold on to each other
to keep from falling too quickly

into it won't ever go away again



Ahh, dear POET D., these are breathtakingly intense words!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-04-07 05:22 PM


Very Wonderfully Written!



ARCTIC WIND

Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
4 posted 2008-04-07 08:37 PM


moment by moment, you caught them like a hidden camera. enjoyed. as always.  
Larrysmom
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5 posted 2008-04-07 09:28 PM


This is truly beautiful Dark… so intense.

Tammy<333

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-04-07 10:43 PM


ms r&b, thanks lady friend

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ms mar, thank you babe for letting me touch your eyes

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a&w, thank you my friend


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seoulair, thanks so much for the read


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ms larry'smom, thanks lady friend for the touch on these words

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7 posted 2008-04-08 10:05 PM


D

A poem to hold close.

A

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-04-08 10:10 PM


ms ali-san, thanks babe for reading and holding..
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