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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2008-04-07 02:25 AM



quiet like the air
secretive is the wind here
under the shadows of the apple trees
feeling the pain to the bitter core
wondering still how to spin with the earth
as daisy quite naturally do
still keeping the silence
as the angel flew.......


~~~kingsangel~~~

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-04-07 03:26 AM


Wonderful thoughts, lovingly expressed!

The daisies do show the way indeed....

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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2 posted 2008-04-07 08:36 AM


wow! Julie! That's awesome girl!

Mountain Goat
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3 posted 2008-04-07 09:23 AM


"still keeping the silence
as the angel flew......."

Really like this

Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2008-04-07 02:19 PM


Thank you for the comments...I think I was "dreaming when I wrote this." LOL

~~~kingsangel~~~

Tears-of-Sanity
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5 posted 2008-04-07 02:29 PM


Very nice words...
I really like them

Tears of Sanity~

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