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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 2008-05-12 07:24 PM



What Would You Do


If you loved somebody
what would you do?

Would you value the love
that was given to you?

Seems like everytime I write
about love, I get tested...


JamesLee
11May
2008



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-05-13 06:55 AM


Dear James, please never stop to write about love. You do it beautifully and you create magical atmospheres and what counts most …. you write your heart!

So that's what I would do: value very much the love given and continue to write about it.

We can't pretend to please everyone, but believe me when I say you are very much appreciated and loved on Pip, whether you write about love or other topics.

So, be true to yourself and continue to share your feelings with us.

Aloha!

Love and joy!
Margherita

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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Mobile, AL
2 posted 2008-05-13 07:17 AM


We all get tested. It isn't fair...but we do.

Very to the point poetry

enjoyed

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-05-13 02:02 PM


as it is said, that which is not tested cannot be tried, and that which cannot be tried can never be judged true...nice write
Claira
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since 2008-05-11
Posts 102
British but living in Thailand
4 posted 2008-05-13 02:16 PM


I know I've been there....a few times. Just hope this next one is difference so yes would value the love.
enjoyed, thanks

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2008-05-13 02:31 PM


Enjoyed very much and smiled...There is hidden deep here...

  thanks

   yann

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