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Open Poetry #42

Nature's Beauty.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-04-06 10:35 PM

As I'm standing on the horizon,
I watch the sun go down,
The beauty of it is really surprisin',
It's nature's wonderful crown.

As it sets, the sun's golden rays shine upon me,
And I start glow with a golden aura,
It's so beautiful, you just have to see,
It's only minutes but it seems like eras

And as the sun sets the sky gets painted a jet black,
With droplets of white splattered across the night sky,
And I keep this as a memory occasionally going back,
So my soul keeps the beauty, and it will never die.

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

1 posted 2008-04-06 11:02 PM

What a beautiful sunset you painted with your pen… and your last line pulls at my heart, well, you probably know why…

Beautiful poetry.

Tammy<333

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-07 12:47 PM

beautiful. enjoyed the read. Yes, a sunset can bright a whole night. indeed, good.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-04-07 04:34 PM

Enjoyed...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-04-07 05:30 PM

Nature is beautiful, huh!

ARCTIC WIND

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

5 posted 2008-04-07 05:32 PM

Yes, nature is indeed, beautiful.

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