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Mountain Goat
Junior Member

since 2008-04-06

Posts 32
High Places

0 posted 2008-04-06 05:30 PM

But this I must hide

Your eyes capture my soul,
I could look into them forever
But this I must hide.

Your smile makes my heart melt
And sing of its demise
But this I must hide.

In your arms I linger a moment,
Wishing it could be an eternity
But this I must hide.

You make me fly heaven high
With an "x" or a sweet word
But this I must hide.

I break down and cry
When your anger is mine
But this I must hide.

My feelings like butterflies
Dash round my being
But this I must hide.

Maybe one day you'll be mine
But untill then I know
That all this I must hide.

One day may be never,
It's my darkest fear,
But this I must hide.

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-06 05:34 PM

very sad. but clear minded.
Very good poem. very good indeed.

And welcome to PIP!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-04-06 05:37 PM

Very sad - I hope that one day you won't have to hide any of this.

I, too, welcome you here and hope that you enjoy the people as much as I have grown to enjoy them.

Alison

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-04-06 05:40 PM

Welcome to Passions

Interesting write...
You did a good job finding a format to convey that sensitive place of in-between the silence and the celebration.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-04-06 05:40 PM

Welcome to Passions, MG.

Your words sing quite true,
but still, all manners to you
as well as all matters,
what'ere they might be
sing high, still high,
to the truths that will be.

Welcome, and please, check your email
for a very special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Mountain Goat
Junior Member

since 2008-04-06

Posts 32
High Places

5 posted 2008-04-06 05:56 PM

Thank you all for your kind replies

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

6 posted 2008-04-06 10:49 PM

Oh this is so sad and yet so beautiful...

Tammy<333

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-04-06 10:57 PM

MG.. welcome to our pages blue.. it is a very beautiful piece you have given us... I look forward to reading more of you .. .love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

8 posted 2008-04-07 06:07 AM

Mountain Goat...Great poem, full of feelings that everyone can relate to.
Welcome to Passions, I hope to read many more of your poems during your stay here...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2008-04-07 07:58 AM

A big WELCOME to this circle of friends and poets~

Lovely entry you've made~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2008-04-07 08:01 AM

You have the choice, I think.

Welcome to Pip!

I enjoyed your first, very romantic entry.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2008-04-07 08:09 AM

I relate

beautiful work

welcome!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

12 posted 2008-04-07 02:23 PM

Welcome to Passions, I will definitely look for more poems by you......

~~~kingsangel~~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2008-04-07 04:13 PM

Nice...I hope that time and situation can bring your desire to fulfillment...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

14 posted 2008-04-07 05:31 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

15 posted 2008-04-07 07:57 PM

why hide it? time is short...tell them..take the chance...

your love is too beautiful to hide!

~ARH

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

16 posted 2008-04-10 10:27 AM

patience is a virtue. It can happen. Good luck!!!

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

17 posted 2008-04-10 06:16 PM

MG, Mighty Good.....& welcome to Passions, John

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

18 posted 2008-04-12 10:20 PM

welcome and one day
you won't have to
hide it

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

19 posted 2008-04-16 04:47 PM

Sweet sorrowful sentiments. Don't hide your eloquence. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

20 posted 2008-04-16 06:05 PM

enjoyed

welcome to passions

Mountain Goat
Junior Member

since 2008-04-06

Posts 32
High Places

21 posted 2008-04-19 10:43 AM

Thank you everybody

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