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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2008-04-06 08:13 AM

I wish I could miss you less each day
To help take the loneliness away
I wish you could miss me more each day
To help make the happiness stay

If I wish upon a star can it be you

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2008-04-06 08:18 AM

ms r&b...they say if wishes were horses then lovers would ride them in gallop to another lover's arms..perhaps they are? enjoyed this

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-04-06 09:20 AM

Mr Daark... thank you for your very lovely thoughts - your thoughts are always welcome.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-04-06 11:53 AM

yeah I relate well

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-04-06 01:07 PM

Awww, Roniece, this is exquisite. I love this and I love the Dark One's reply. I wish you horses, sweetie.

Ali

RC Langill
Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 104

5 posted 2008-04-06 02:09 PM

I don't have the ghost of a suggestion how you could make this better. It's wonderful the way it is.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-04-06 02:25 PM

Dear RDB,

Nice thought well put.

Bobby

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

7 posted 2008-04-06 03:10 PM

RDB, If I were the star you were wishing upon, wild horses would not drag me away! John

Mountain Goat
Junior Member

since 2008-04-06

Posts 32
High Places

8 posted 2008-04-06 05:22 PM

Lovely! Very succinct/brief yet says so much!

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

9 posted 2008-04-06 08:23 PM

RDB,

Again, you have managed to capture so very much thought and feeling with so little an amount of words… What an incredible poet you are.

Tammy<333

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

10 posted 2008-04-06 10:29 PM

wonderful. short but wonderful. my wish too.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2008-04-07 05:37 AM

Thank you all so much.. your comments have warmed my heart... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2008-04-07 06:31 AM

Delicious thoughts...I am impressed...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2008-04-07 06:49 AM

James... I'm honoured that you are impressed my sweet friend...

thank you x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2008-04-07 07:01 AM

This is truly exquisite, dear Roniece!!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

15 posted 2008-04-07 07:28 AM

simple truths of heart, o so lovely , your words

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

16 posted 2008-04-07 07:43 AM

Margherita... thank you lovely one x

Ms Inky... you are wonderful.. thank you x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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