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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-04-06 07:55 AM



A Love Truly Meant to Be

Oh yes, its true that
my heart favored you,
and as we walked
together and talked
of hopes and dreams
for the future,
we were caring for
every moment of
the present,
so much so
that we could
feel our love grow,
as if it was a love
that was truly
meant to be,
me loving you
and you
loving
me.

JamesLee
05April
2008





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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-06 08:01 AM


love your work James...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-04-06 05:54 PM


Thank you Roniece, I appreciate your sweet comments...James
Seoulair
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3 posted 2008-04-07 12:54 PM


how right on cherish the moment.
always enjoy reading your romance.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-04-07 05:34 AM


Thank you SeoulAir...I appreciate it...James
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ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2008-04-07 08:38 AM


Sweeter with every step.
Enjoyed this James.

Mountain Goat
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7 posted 2008-04-07 09:18 AM


I like the flow in this, feels very right Very meant to be!!
gilead
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8 posted 2008-04-07 01:14 PM


True love captures the moment, and endures beyond it! Very beautifully expressed.

Art

Larrysmom
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9 posted 2008-04-07 02:17 PM


OH this is gorgeous… True soul mates have met.

Tammy<333

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10 posted 2008-04-08 09:54 PM


And, James, it's a beautiful love that you share with all of us.  You make me smile.

Alison

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2008-04-09 05:33 AM


Thank you passing shadows, this Diamond, Mountain Goat, gilead, Larrysmom and Alison for the wonderful responses...James
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