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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2008-04-06 04:53 AM



as if it had been written so
pre-arranged by Fate and the Stars
.... one has fallen, not out of place
but into this once empty space
giving song, two hearts to behold
as if in a dance
long and low ...

irreplaceable


and of what scents does it all make?
unconditions and lone jasmine
blood, sweat, tears of a single rose ...
take two hand, this the earth we chose
walk with me far as we may reach
each step magical
in its take ...

irreplaceable


written in the stars, long and low
blood, sweat, tears ...
together we'll grow

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow.   -  Ct/05

              

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-04-06 05:00 AM


just beautiful! your poetry moves me... thank you  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2008-04-06 09:53 AM


heavenly with a touch of earthly delights

irreplacable, untracable
just because
love is..............

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2008-04-06 11:54 AM


A waltz of words this is ctowen, and it is beautiful.

Pure poetry in motion.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2008-04-06 04:09 PM


Enjoyed
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