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PurplePenButterfly
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since 2008-03-06
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0 posted 2008-04-06 12:04 PM



Rainbow Cow Smiling....

One day upon a barnyard
In a timewarp far away
There in the pasture of weirdness
This creature did lay
Coloured in assortment of hues
Varying from intense to pastel
I tell you it stood out from others
Oh yes
Quite well
Mooing and gnawing at grass so lush
No hurrying this one
Not intending to rush
At night when the moon
Celestrial and full
There stands this animal
Content in its own peace
And that's no bull
Dawn comes around and the sun is a rising
Why of course in the centre of it all
You guessed it
Rainbow Cow smiling...

© PurplePenButterfly~2008

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-04-06 12:07 PM


Jacki.. this brought a lovely smile thank you!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
2 posted 2008-04-06 12:22 PM


I cannot explain to you why this poem brought tears to my eyes because it would make no sense to anyone other than me, but I will tell you, that for me your Rainbow Cow Smiling, with its incredible beauty and uniqueness, is so very, very special and it reminds me of someone who is just the same… I cannot begin to thank you enough for writing and sharing this incredible piece…

Tammy<333

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-06 12:55 PM


lovely. love the read.
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-04-06 05:18 AM


Great writing, enjoyed a lot.

   yann

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 posted 2008-04-06 02:01 PM


PurplePenButterfly,

Nice work kid.  A smiling cow is a happy cow--gives contented milk.

Drink more milk.

Bobby

Sunshine
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6 posted 2008-04-06 03:34 PM


I'm smiling because it seems
as if the 60's came alive again
when I didn't get to do anything
but listen to others
talking about rainbows.



This was very good...
and quite meaningful.


Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2008-04-06 04:55 PM


I hear mellow moos and see this whimsical creature munching contentedly on a sea of vibrant green grass.
An enjoyable read!

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