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Our dance |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 The Pleiades Our dance Do you hear the unique song played softly upon ocean waves by swarms of teasing sunbeams? Do you feel the bright glow expanding deep within your soul? It shows now in your eyes for me to contemplate this night, as the pure reflection of moonrise. See? We are this moment of light! Move closer to me now take my hands in yours absorb me as I absorb you so that we can die to ourselves only to be reborn anew you as me and me as you, dissolving into the domain of total and perfect adherence, where our molecules blend. See? We are this moment of One! Now close your eyes! Let these love sparks smile and whisper to every single cell to get ready for our dance and the magical fireworks, to make Universe shiver in delight. Until our feet lose ground and our bodies rise into the night out of sight, falling upon the perfect meadow of stars beckoning from Above. See? We are this! We are Love! * |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Margherita, your poetry is enchanting at best! And this, reads like a dream!! Lovely poem~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Just beautiful with stellar charm. These words can transform the slug into a star |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is such a joy to see you back on these pages, dear Bluesy! Thank you! Thank you dear Michele for the charming reply! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful poem!! a beauty. |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh this is perfect love between two soul mates… Beautiful… Just beautiful. Tammy<333 |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - to write it is to know it and because you know it you have written it as only you can do - beautifully! Love Helen |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, This is a good poem, picture combination. I like it just fine. I’d dance with you anytime. Bobby |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita.....Indeed!! I love the place that you wrote this from. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Maga, poetry in motion for sure...perfection in prose...you are so good, Thanks for posting John xx |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Margherita... simply stunning!  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Ocean Vuong Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 37NYC |
very cute piece, love it! but rhyme scheme, rhyme scheme, I cant stress this enough, you have a lot of potential with this majestic piece. Also try cutting down on the modifiers, they can sometimes blur the sharper image that nouns can bring to surface. Thanks for the read M! -ocean |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
You shared a great moment with absolute talent... Thanks yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely dream dance, Margherita. Thank you for sharing the beauty and the music of your words. xoxoxo Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, something special in the words of your sky..like a dreamer in her ballet shoes..enjoyed it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends, for reading and commenting so lovingly! You warm my heart. Ocean, I appreciate your remarks, thank you. I don't care for rhymes, but I love to hear the "tune", so sometimes the rhyme fits me well, without a scheme though, just when it happens casually. Love, Margherita |
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