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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2008-04-05 03:05 AM



Rusted red buds
blowing in the
sparkling white mid-
night gown.
Treasured by the tree limbs
held solid brown,
pressed to the blue sky.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2008 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-05 03:08 AM


my goodness Amelia! your words are filled with beauty! lovely work here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2008-04-05 03:20 AM


I was hoping you would give us another...

This one had an asian feel to it, so delicate. You delight me.

May Pip have an Amelia meteor shower tonight! (er..this morning)

*chuckling*

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-04-05 06:00 AM


Oh, I love your vision!

Truly delightful!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-04-05 07:00 AM


one of those places
I must journey to
with my slow shoes on

n-joyed

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-04-05 08:41 AM


Redheart angrybraids,

This is well written.  I like the way it's arranged.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-04-05 11:20 AM


You have a way with words, Amelia.
                                  Ida

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2008-04-05 11:28 AM


Amelia~
You dance words to a tune of their own~
BEAUTIFUL this .... so lovely you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2008-04-05 12:05 PM


Your poem reads like a gentle caress on a warm breeze.
It skims the surface with subtle impact, and is felt deeply.


I really enjoyed reading this.

Larrysmom
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9 posted 2008-04-05 12:53 PM


WOW!!! Beautiful...

Tammy<333

Alison
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10 posted 2008-04-05 02:54 PM


Beautiful - truly beautiful, Amelia.

Alison

PS - I love this name too -- redheart angrybraids

Seoulair
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11 posted 2008-04-05 02:56 PM


beautiful and soft.
1slick_lady
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12 posted 2008-04-07 08:41 PM


breathtaking
redheart angrybraids
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13 posted 2008-04-11 01:57 AM


much love and peace to you all. thank you.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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