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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-04-04 08:48 PM


    


"The Sculptor"

Priceless are his hands,
precision tools of care,
limitless of perfection,

Carefully guided decisions,
intrumented incisions,
molding human clay.

Bare, I become a canvas,
his work of art,
created by his hands,

Human artwork,
reflecting that of long ago,
a modern day Michelangelo.



You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-04 08:54 PM


ARH... this is beautiful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-04-05 11:19 AM


Beautiful, Love the quote, too.
                         Ida

Seoulair
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3 posted 2008-04-05 03:12 PM


very good. Do we all in the hand of Sculptors?
very good poem!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-04-05 07:15 PM


Beautifully Written Indeed!



ARCTIC WIND

Ocean Vuong
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5 posted 2008-04-05 08:28 PM


Solid.


-ocean

rad802
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6 posted 2008-06-27 08:22 PM


It's nice to be able to see angels in stone.

Rick Delmonico

Richy
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7 posted 2008-06-28 07:35 PM


How nicely you molded such a fine piece of art.
A model of words warmed by a true sculptors hands
to be made pliable and soft, to press and conform to
this shape of poetic sculpture.

What sensual curves your verses take,
to almost come alive in true form.

You gotta like a girl who doesn’t mind getting
her hands dirty, playing with terra firma’s play-doh.

Lovely piece here Romantic.

Your muse is a wonder,
and it's on fire!
Rich

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-06-28 07:43 PM


Yo A Romantic Heart,

I like this very much.  It's hot.

Bobby

XGarapanX
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9 posted 2008-06-28 08:08 PM


Incredible.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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