Follow This Evening Through

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Open Poetry #42

Follow This Evening Through

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-04 05:06 PM

Follow This Evening Through

The pleasures of the night
are calling me, calling me
into the arms of your delight.

The heavens opened up
and blessed me with a
woman as sweet as you.

And now, wrapped up
within our desires
we'll follow this
evening through.

JamesLee
03April
2008

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-04 05:10 PM

Beautiful. Woman, love, poem, a triptych.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-04-04 05:34 PM

smiles.. James this is just lovely! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2008-04-04 06:37 PM

JamesMichael~
*sighs*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-04-05 04:31 AM

Such a good way with words James, being in love obviously agrees with you ( as I usually always do..) John

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-04-05 05:59 AM

Sounds like a perfect evening, dear James!

I love your heart songs.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-04-06 07:21 PM

Thank you Seoulair, Roniece, Marge, effjayel and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

7 posted 2008-04-07 04:03 PM

Oh this is gorgeous… So much love and desire in this. And I love the way you gently closed the rest of the world out. Awesome writing.

Tammy<333

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-04-07 05:30 PM

The heavens opened up
and blessed me with a
woman as sweet as you...."

Very Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2008-04-08 04:29 AM

Thank you Larrysmom and Artic Wind for the wonderful respnses...James

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