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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-04-04 03:28 PM


I thought I wouldn't do that never mind
but then when it came up to it
it seemed only worthy as a tribute
to the places you had showed me

when you were a gunfighter's daughter
wearing hand me down leather
that didn't fit you like it should
until you made it perfect there

and you had the other things too
like lines down a highway's thigh
was it death's butterflys above
or just a sinner's heaven in tattoos

the smooth times of your contributions
how you toyed them to fit my thirsty
and made me offer even him my thoughts
of how we might make you our double deputy

just to earn the punishment of your eyes


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daark



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2008-04-04 03:31 PM


You're delightfully winsome today...




inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2008-04-04 04:25 PM


double deputy
double D
indeed

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3 posted 2008-04-04 04:37 PM


*shivers*

I loved this...

Seoulair
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4 posted 2008-04-04 04:38 PM


what a poem of fantasy !

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-04-04 04:55 PM


ms sun...a cool place in my mind..thanks babe


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ms inky, I think you would enjoy shopping in this location, thanks ms


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ms suesea, thanks babe...it is a place you would enjoy hanging out in I think...
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friend seoulair, thanks for the eyes

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-04-04 05:31 PM


ah we are seeing the wonderful of you here Mr Daark...  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-04-04 05:32 PM


ms r&b, thanks lady friend for looking in this window
Margherita
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8 posted 2008-04-05 05:52 AM


Such enticing words, dear POET D., there are interesting items in your candy store!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-04-05 06:56 AM


mon mar....thanks babe...it has so many items for one to contemplate
BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2008-04-05 02:48 PM


the smooth times of your contributions
how you toyed them to fit my thirsty
and made me offer even him my thoughts
of how we might make you our double deputy.
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Reckon a gal would be right proud to wear that badge, even if she did shoot the sheriff!!  Heck, she was probably thirsty too, while she gulped instead of sipped, and threw caution to the wind.    

Your poetry never fails, DS~
  

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-04-05 02:50 PM


ms bluezy..

things that happen in windows are usually reflections from someone else's memories...thanks babe, missed you at coffee

Larrysmom
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12 posted 2008-04-05 03:01 PM


WOW! If I could write like that...

Tammy<333

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-04-05 03:08 PM


ms larry's mom, "until we meet again on some distant tomorrow"..you do write well ms!! thank you for the blessing here
Angel4aKing
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14 posted 2008-04-05 07:18 PM


Well, I am glad I stopped by today. It has been ages. You always add a sparkle to my day....if you get my drift....Cheers to this one great work.

~~~kingsangel~~~

Larrysmom
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15 posted 2008-04-05 08:40 PM


Dark Stranger,

Thank you so very much for taking the time to visit my site and most especially for the compliment on my own writing. Now I must go fix the “in” and make it “on”… Thank you again.

Tammy<333

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16 posted 2008-04-06 01:54 AM


D

You write magic, you know that?  This is one to savor.

A

Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2008-04-06 07:50 AM


ms julie, thanks angel

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ms ali-san, thank you lady with laughter

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ms tam'  it works either way..in or on, thanks for sharing it too

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