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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2008-04-04 11:50 AM




This stoic countenance is but a veil
That shrouds my yearning heart; it keeps a pace
Which reveals not the roiling 'neath the mail,
Nor this death I live, unknowst to thy face.  
Oh, uncage the caged passions of my heart!
Rove thy kisses wild! - Only thou this gate
Shall breach; only thou shall break apart
The mortar and the stone -- else let the Fate
Unchanged prevail and stay me in my Keep -
So what of the moat that holds but cremains
Of the past, settling ever in the deep? --
When above a bridge, drawn to thy domains:  
Then breathe a kiss onto my soul, thy breath
The envoy of the life that kills this death.


CG

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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-04-04 01:20 PM


beautiful. I myself has not been able to write one Sonnet.
Love the read.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2008-04-04 05:07 PM


well done!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-04-04 08:35 PM


just lovely!!  Sonnets are my favorite form.. I wish I could write at least one in my lifetime!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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