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HopeS
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0 posted 2008-04-03 08:17 AM



  


Picturing It In My Mind

As I look into the mirror
Is it the future I could see
Arms around my waist
As our eyes gaze lovingly

Captivated by the image
How romantic it would be
Looking into the future
Perhaps this could be me

Love and romance I view
Seeing smiles on her face
Picturing it in my mind
In those visions I embrace

A romantic couple I see
As thoughts turned to you
Still here I am wishing
Hoping dreams come true


HopeĀ©2008


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Brian23
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1 posted 2008-04-03 08:40 AM


Wow nice poem, I especially like the accompanying picture which really adds something.  
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2 posted 2008-04-03 01:01 PM


Christine, I think you captured every single little girl's, tween's, and teen's dream in a nutshell there.  I know I had that moment once in my lifetime too, in my own Gramma's attic.  Lovely!  Just a lovely poem.

Carpe' Diem


Seoulair
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3 posted 2008-04-03 01:36 PM


very beautiful. Lovely poem.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-04-03 06:27 PM


beautiful words here dear Hope   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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5 posted 2008-04-03 06:28 PM


nice read
LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-04-03 08:19 PM



Dear Hope I hope your dreams do come true

whatever you may dream for.

I always enjoy your poems.

Lindsay

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