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ORICLE1984 New Member
since 2008-04-02
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Everything is normal, everything is real, nothing is feared. all of a sudden it hits you right out of the blue. so hard like a lighting bolt - this slow almost agonisning heat hits you, then you know and hear you self say "Oh no not again" This heat evaporates threw your body , disoliving into tingles in your now ice cold fingers, this is when your mind goes numb almost light headed like helem in a ballon. Its feels like a thousand needles prcking your brain. all you can think is "when is this going to end?" Then the most terrifying thing happens the dots you have seen all your life , seem to gang up and form and army, this is there time to fight it seems. The dots start to form clusters slowly the vision goes like a T.V. that getting tuned, all grey fussy - static like, but still sound seeps in, slowly getting disorted by the mayhem unfoldoing ... you think "what the ****!". Then it just happens , there is nothing , no world, just a black void of nothingness, this emptyness goes on and on for what seems like for ever. Even tho this is happening , there is nothing you cn do to stop it, its like your parolised in your own body. for a while it seems like the dots have won. After what seems like an age , sound seeps in slowly. Your confused , disorented and dont know whats just happend. all you can hear is.... "Cheryl are you ok?" "Your white as a sheet." "Look at me!" How do I look at you when i cant see you? The blackness is terrifying, its like a blindness, your helpless. yo need to sit down. Sloly the blackness turns grey, still tanting you , not giving you full control. stil the mayhem unfolds. by now you are terrifyed thinking "am i dead?" This feeling is the most terrifying thing you can feel and no one knows how it feels, you feel alone. The grey turn to fuss, slowly colou seeps hrew the disorted images , you can almost make out the concerned faces. They are holding you head still asking "are you ok?" by now your looking at them saying "iam ok dont worry". |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
A moment in life.... |
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