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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

0 posted 2008-04-02 07:25 PM




Falling Embers

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Sparkling embers tumble from the meteorite shower.
One by one they fall down through the moonlit, midnite sky.
-- Blowing in the wind, dancing in tune with leaves.
Fairies sing under the ember lit sky
and sit on newly bloomed flowers.

As the embers fall to the Earth...

*_*
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ARCTIC WIND

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-04-02 07:27 PM


An absolutely delightful vision, dear Arctic Wind!

I love it very much.

Love,
Margherita

Seoulair
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2 posted 2008-04-02 07:28 PM


beautiful and soft. like dream!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-04-03 02:40 AM


oh I love this visual Michael!  When I was recently in Alice Springs in the desert (see effjayel, I got the spelling right this time!)   I saw not one but two shooting stars at night - just awesome!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LittleDevil
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4 posted 2008-04-03 04:37 AM


Very nice!  Thank you for sharing this with us all!
LittleDevil
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5 posted 2008-04-03 04:40 AM


one night i layed on the roof of my house talking to my girl.  there must've been a meteor shower cuz i saw at least 20 shooting stars that night (i think more even).  it was amazing.  i made many wishes, and married that girl.  even tho we are divorced now, i remember that night, and thank the lord for that amazing sight
2islander2
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6 posted 2008-04-03 05:55 AM


Nice work... too cloudy here.

   yann

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-04-03 06:20 AM


Enjoyed...James
vandana
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8 posted 2008-04-03 06:30 PM


good read
LindsayP
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9 posted 2008-04-03 08:07 PM



I enjoyed that one Artic Wind

You wrote it well.

Lindsay

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2008-04-03 11:01 PM


Very pretty, ArcticWind.
                    Ida
        

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
11 posted 2008-04-03 11:06 PM


beautiful
Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-04-07 05:35 PM


Margherita-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-04-07 05:35 PM


seoulair-

Thanks

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Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-04-07 05:36 PM


RDB-

Thank you very much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2008-04-07 05:36 PM


Little Devil-

Welcome to pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-04-07 05:36 PM


Little Devil-

Nice! thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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Islander-

Thanks!

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Artic Wind
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18 posted 2008-04-07 05:37 PM


JamesMichael-

Thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-04-07 05:38 PM


Vandana-

Thank you so very much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-04-07 05:38 PM


LindsayP-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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21 posted 2008-04-07 05:38 PM


Marchmadness-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-04-07 05:39 PM


1-slick lady-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Larrysmom
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23 posted 2008-04-08 04:30 PM


I have just seen beautiful shooting stars…

Tammy<333

Artic Wind
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24 posted 2008-04-09 07:32 AM


LarrysMom-

Oh thank you! I love watching shooting stars at night myself

ARCTIC WIND

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