Your touchprint on my shoulder...

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2008-04-02 06:33 AM

I caught your touchprint on my shoulder
waiting patiently for me to find you
and when I did I knew then
that you had smiled my day complete

I hope to catch more of your touchprints soon...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (04-02-2008 07:27 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2008-04-02 09:10 AM

how clever!

I love the thought!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-04-02 11:40 AM

Hello Roniece, I guess a touchprint is when someone touches lightly you, (i'm not sure)
very nice poem...

yann

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

3 posted 2008-04-02 01:03 PM

"you had smiled my day complete"-it is good. you have used words to your full advantage.

clever talks delay friendship!

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27

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Seoul S.Korea

4 posted 2008-04-02 01:17 PM

beautiful poem. tickles my heart.

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-04-02 04:15 PM

Dear RDB,

This is a good poem, I like it. It touches me.

Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

6 posted 2008-04-02 05:22 PM

Dear Roniece, this is delightful you know! I love this kind of touch, it is deeply perceived when the connection works. Where will you feel it next time ... I guess the target will be your lips

.

So sweet!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-04-02 06:10 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-04-02 07:14 PM

Wonderfully Written RDB!

ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2008-04-02 07:57 PM

The next time you feel a touchprint on your shoulder, well it will be mine and I will

feel priviledged to make it. Enjoyed your post dear Roniece. Take care.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-04-03 06:18 PM

Thank you everyone for your warm responses...you always manage to smile my day complete... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

11 posted 2008-04-05 11:06 AM

that little touch can echo deeply
sometimes we forget
thanks for the reminder

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

12 posted 2008-04-05 08:44 PM

RDB,

If I could say so very much with such few beautiful words…. I would be a true poet. What an incredible piece.

Tammy<333

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2008-04-05 10:48 PM

thank you both so much.. your comments have smiled my day... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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