Open Poetry #42 |
Leaning into each other's soul |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* Leaning into each other's soul * Perched in the sacred tree of life shooting through misty dawn we pretended to enjoy freedom. Until we met perchance upon parallel thought waves which had traveled far in unison to merge above love horizons. Leaning into each other's soul we now breathe as one chi flows unhindered and free, in placid rivers of consciousness, over sleeping volcanoes. Glued together by flames of desire we can't lose each other, even when on wild wheels we race in opposite directions, swallowing different highways. Because thought waves are like angels ... they move above light speed. Leaning into each other's soul we discover the perfect place to meet, ... it quietly waits for us at the very core of the Whole. * |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
Absolutely beautiful. love the read and very true but it is very hard in reality. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A great romantic post dear Margherita I really enjoyed it. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You're good. Margharita. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Margherita... you have written a masterpiece! or should I say "another" masterpiece.. this is truly beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
"we pretended to enjoy freedom. Until we met perchance"_ it is a great poem. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, This is a nice poem and picture. It brings an interesting question to mind. Does anything travel faster that the speed of light. My scientific training tells me no, not even thoughts. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Pip Poet friends for the generous replies! Dear Bobby, not always the laws of physics remain intact as we know from past experiences ... though the speed of light is said to be a physical constant, it is very fascinating to imagine that light speed can be smashed by new discoveries ... thoughts being electrical impulses are surely very fast and probably we do not use yet our full potential ... anyway here I used my imagination. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely Margherita!-- I love the photo's you choose to put with your lovely Poems! ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a great write! I love that 'leaning into each other's soul' concept. am tucking this into my library |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You could sell your poetry to Merck. It's soooooooo soothing Margherita... yer just...special! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Michael, Kacy and Karen, so pleased to find your loving comments here! Love, Margherita |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Oh this is gorgeous!!! You are an incredible poet Margherita. Tammy<333 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, loved this journey my friend...always do when I read you... jimmy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much dear Tammy and dear Jimmy for your generous and loving comments. May you enjoy a beautiful new day, filled with sunshine. Love, Margherita |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Your words are a delight and as beautiful as the picture that accents them. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
what a breath of freshness, delightful |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love your soul lean, Margherita. You have such beauty in yours. Love, A |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Such a soothing sense of true romance. It left me longing for a bit of my own. Thanks for the pleasure. sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enjoyed your loving replies, dear Steve, Kris, Alison and Sharyn. Thank you from my heart. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita, i almost missed your poem ( i can't read all the poems here there are so much) and i would have regret it... thanks to you yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Merci, cher Yann! Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am such a fan and this is so beautiful....and again, I thought I had already replied.. sigh... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am delighted that this spiritually cosmic poem of love, was brought back up to view! I had missed it! ~and have thankfully been given the opportunity to read it at this time! I actually have goosebumps! Much love to you, Maga Margherita! You have a glorious spirit and a talent extraordinaire! Angelo Terrestre |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sweet girls, Donna and Linda, thank you for the smiles you brought with your loving replies! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your poems are intoxicating with their words of warmth |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
delicious as always, I enjoyed the speed of angels and so more.... yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Michele and dear Yann! Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita....I think that you have found the perfect place to travel. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Margherita, what a beautiful poem this is - I also love the concept of two souls leaning into each other. You really seem to be writing from the position of present happiness. I am too afraid to ask . . . contrary to a poem of mine called "Please say it isn't true", I say with trepidation, "Please say it IS true." - Owl |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A very beautiful piece of work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Martie, such a joy to find you in here, thank you ... and the answer is YES! Dear Diana, thank you so much for hoping ... for you too the answer is YES ... I do have my happy moments, the inspiration behind these words is authentic. Thank you dear Stephen for your kind comment! Love, Margherita |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Glued together by flames of desire we can't lose each other, even when on wild wheels we race in opposite directions, swallowing different highways. This is a beauty. Thank you, Margherita. Now I'm gone to read this again.. ~H |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
That need to be free, as in a tear shed. Knowing it all is waiting for us. You have the touch Margherita. That which seperates the clouds, so one can see. Very nice write conveying such... wayne |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear H. and dear Wayne, I enjoyed your very kind comments! Love, Margherita |
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