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Jeffry Dogma
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since 2008-03-24
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0 posted 2008-04-01 04:53 PM



Frustrated yet passive I peer through the window.
blinding sun, then there's beauty.
A calm came about,I remember gratification is slow.
I reflect on my karma, it's good from what I see.
Then I’m humbled, I can't make out what’s below.
I reflect on my meaning and if it's just me.
We fly, we hit a cloud, my view seizes to show.
Like the view, life too can be short as can be.
I'm peaceful, thankful I know where I’ll go.
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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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1 posted 2008-04-01 05:15 PM


very good.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2008-04-01 07:10 PM


I'm peaceful, thankful I know where I’ll go.


Great affirmation, beautiful words.

Love,
Margherita

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