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vandana
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0 posted 2008-05-12 11:44 AM




Love Letters
I'm writing down this love letter
To you
I know
We were friends
And yet we didn't tell our feelings
So I'm telling you
my feelings of you
This love of ours
Is special to me
I wanted to just let you know
That life has been good to me
And now Iam here
telling you That I love you
This is one of my first love letter
From me
To you
I wanted to tell you that
I love you so much
And I want to keep our love alive
I just wanted to tell you
that our love is true
Love letter from me
To you


[This message has been edited by vandana (05-14-2008 06:49 PM).]

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2008-05-12 02:01 PM


Very Sweet.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Alison
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2 posted 2008-05-13 09:20 PM


vandana,

Nice writing.

Alison

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-05-13 09:27 PM


Dear Vandana,

This is a very lovely love letter.  

Please remember, the contraction for I am, is written as I'm.

Love Bobby

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