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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2008-03-31 12:27 PM

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Thunder rumbles
Outside the window
The wet air
Is gray and cold

Though far apart
We are drifting
Together
Into being old

Without respect
The rain comes down
On her birthday


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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-03-31 03:17 PM

beautiful. sad. Why do I sense a bit humor here? or I didn't get it?
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-03-31 03:18 PM

poignant,thoughtful poem, enjoyed.
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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2008-03-31 05:55 PM

well done!

applause!!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2008-04-01 12:41 PM

without respect

nice touch
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