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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-03-31 06:09 AM



we peeled stamps off our envelopes
just to taste the glue again
like it was when we were other people
in younger skin tennis shoes

I heard your bare feet running
looking for towels for a spill
and I was poking holes in the sky
with my pony on a stick

there were no commercials long enough
for our love times to heal
only slow motion movie stars
that enjoyed watching us change channels

then replay the wanting parts again
til we had them down in our memories
and mailed them to ourselves later
somewhere else in time to read them

and come back here to our future
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daark


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-03-31 07:58 AM


It's so good that you have memorized everything so well , because to plunge into your poetry in this present moment is an experience that I wouldn't want to miss!

Timeless!

Love,
Margherita

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-03-31 08:53 AM


quite wonderful!
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-03-31 09:10 AM


Dark Stranger,

This is an enjoyable write.  It brings back some good memories.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-03-31 07:04 PM


this is very lovely Mr Daark... you make me want to lose myself somewhere for you to come rescue me...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ayearofdust
Junior Member
since 2008-03-31
Posts 11

5 posted 2008-03-31 08:14 PM


I really enjoyed reading this. It will stick in my mind for some time.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2008-03-31 11:22 PM


ms mar, thanks lady friend


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seouliar, thank you for the read
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bobby-jay, thank you sir for the friendly touch

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ms r&b, thanks hon for the eyes


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a.y.o.d, thanks so much for the read and welcome to the pip place

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2008-04-01 10:08 AM


You do write so effortlessly...

it's always a pleasure to read you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2008-04-01 11:20 AM


Ms Sun, you smile my mind with your soft touch. Thanx babe
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