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Open Poetry #42

Beauty hidden in light

kudanesh
Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2008-03-31 05:15 AM

Beauty hidden in light

To see a red rose light from the sky will bounce off the rose and in to your eye
Down through the retainer and through to you brain
So it can move it does again and again
Its amazing how a light from the sky
Can carry such beauty into your eye
But it is not just beauty that it carries through
It can carry horrible and terrible things to
But I wish nice things for you to see
Nice things like blue skies and green leaves in trees
I bid you a good day and I hope the light from the sky
Will bring many beauties strait to your eyes

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-03-31 08:48 AM

lovely. Same wish back to you. Beautiful poem.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-03-31 09:45 AM

nice

I like this one

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-31 03:25 PM

Your writing has greatly improved, Andrew.
I can tell you have been working hard and producing some fine poetry too.
Keep up the good work.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-04-01 12:33 PM

Andrew, this is very beautiful!

Your heart contains the light.

Love,
Margherita

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